Worth Another Shot

Poetics Aside November Challenge – Day 13
Write a letter
Write a recipe

Dear Ms. Erable,

I was distressed to learn that your recipe attempt
did not go well. However, in looking over the
ingredients and the order in which they were
blended together, I did find some errors which
may be causing your final product to fail.

To begin, you left out compassion which is a
vital ingredient for success. In placing sexual
fulfillment first, you have neglected the art
of conversation and communication. Sense
of humor was used correctly, as well as love.

I suggest you give this recipe a second chance
and please do let me know the outcome.

Yours truly,

Mr. Wright

 

About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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4 Responses to Worth Another Shot

  1. Green Speck says:

    Aha … that’s a nice suggestion 😛

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  2. Appreciation of speaker as Mr. (W)right and the succinct review of recipe outcome. Sage advice given. Thank-you.

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