Written for: Poetic Asides April 2016 Challenge – Day 21
Write a poem that responds (or somehow communicates) with another poem.
Form – Golden Shovel:
Take a line (or lines) from a poem you admire.
Use each word in the line (or lines) as an end word in your poem.
Keep the end words in order.
Give credit to the poet who originally wrote the line (or lines).
The new poem does not have to be about the same subject as the poem that offers the end words.
I used the following poem:
How to Triumph Like A Girl
I like the lady horses best,
how they make it all look easy,
like running 40 miles per hour
is as fun as taking a nap, or grass.
I like their lady horse swagger,
after winning. Ears up, girls, ears up!
But mainly, let’s be honest, I like
that they’re ladies. As if this big
dangerous animal is also a part of me,
that somewhere inside the delicate
skin of my body, there pumps
an 8-pound female horse heart,
giant with power, heavy with blood.
Don’t you want to believe it?
Don’t you want to tug my shirt and see
the huge beating genius machine
that thinks, no, it knows,
it’s going to come in first.
They say I can be dangerous.
Run my race to win. An animal
of my caliber has to. Is
the future a worry for me, also?
Some of my friends, A-
one fillies, have disappeared to parts
unknown. ‘Beautiful’ they say, speaking of
my performance. Pat my rump. There is more to me.