Using Fragment & Phrase

Written for:  Carpe Diem Theme Week (6) 5, “Ask Jane”
“For the purposes of this discussion, I would like to call the shorter portion, the fragment and the longer portion, or rest of the poem, the phrase.
The need for distinguishing between the two parts of the ku takes on importance when one begins to discuss the use of articles (“a”, “an” and “the”) because it is possible to have different rules concerning the different parts. Before getting into that, let me state that the fragment can be (or usually is) either line 1 or line 3. A clear example of the first is:

rain gusts
the electricity goes
on and off

It is also possible to write ku in which the reader would have to decide which part was the fragment by combining either lines 1 and 2 or reading lines 2 and 3 together to make the phrase. An example might be:

moonlit pines
dimming
the flashlight      

Here are my attempts for each:

broken
a delicate seashell
roughened by waves

hand in hand
the lovers walk on clouds
no sense of gravity

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I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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One Response to Using Fragment & Phrase

  1. Yes you got it Sara! It gets to be a bit technical in trying to fit them in1

    Hank

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