“lotus viewing”

Written for:  Carpe Diem Special (2nd guest) Kala Ramesh’s 3rd “lotus viewing”
Write a poem in the same sense, tone, and spirit.


lotus viewing . . .
the flowering

the pause
in a dragonfly’s glide—
noon shadows

© Kala Ramesh

Here is my attempt:

rain falls
filling up little pink cups
petals of lotus



About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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One Response to “lotus viewing”

  1. Such a fragile beauty.


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