Gold Eyes

Written for:  Carpe Diem #1278 – Enigma (music by Karunesh)
(Being inspired by music)

dawn
dewdrops
shimmer
the fench
glistens

© Chèvrefeuille (experimental tanka)

Here is my attempt:

sundial moves
to sunset
reflected
in animal
eyes of gold

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.nl/

About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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2 Responses to Gold Eyes

  1. I love your experimental tanka Sara … it’s so nice to see how you are pushing yourself to improve in haiku skills.

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