Waiting

Posted on April 10, 2018 by

Written for:  Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads – “Waiting for . . . ”  (posted by Izy)
Write a poem about waiting, but don’t tell us what you are waiting for in the poem.

Evening wears on,
soon full night
will be upon us,
she thinks. Weariness
wrinkles her brow,
sallows her skin.
Somehow she knows
her wait is over.

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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12 Responses to Waiting

  1. Vivian Zems says:
    April 10, 2018 at 12:15 am

    Hmmm- I hope it’s something nice😊

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  2. Vivian Zems says:
    April 10, 2018 at 12:16 am

    Oh dear…with all that weariness…maybe not.

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  3. Sherry Blue Sky says:
    April 10, 2018 at 2:02 am

    Oh this is intriguing………a great hook, makes one wonder what comes next. Very cool.

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  4. isadoragruye says:
    April 10, 2018 at 2:10 am

    I am just amazed at how you have created a full character in so few words. Just in how you describe her thoughts and emotions. So well done and thanks for posting!

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  5. Margaret Elizabeth Bednar says:
    April 10, 2018 at 2:58 am

    the moon? Hmmm somehow I don’t think so . I’m curious.

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  6. kanzensakura says:
    April 10, 2018 at 3:12 am

    Excellent the wait you did this in so few lines. I wonder what she is Waiting fir? Someone to die, to be born, to be told she had gotten the job? So many things to ponder.

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  7. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:
    April 10, 2018 at 3:42 am

    Ominous … though it sounds as if she would welcome it.

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