Written for: Carpe Diem #1412 (extreme haibun) – Daisies
“Today I have a new task for you all. The prompt for today is “daisies” and you are invited to create an extreme haibun or in other words “your haibun may have a maximum of 55 words including the haiku (or in this task … tanka).”
around the farmer’s house –
lowing of a cow
© Chèvrefeuille (our host)
Here is my attempt:
Tiny pinpoints of white flashed
on the hillside. As I neared,
their size seemed to stay the same,
rather than grow in proportion.
They were miniature daisies, looking
as if they were painted to splash
the hillside with color.
green hill splashed
in rich whites with egg yolk centers