Written for:  Carpe Diem #1556 fleeting autumn (yuku aki)

In autumn, the feeling of sadness and loss is especially explicit in most of the kigo related to its parting. The coming winter season was a hard one to live through in the times without electricity and central heating of the Edo period.

So many haiku about “fleeting autumn” were written in a sad tone, but there were also haiku that were positive, because after the dark period of the year nature will come alive again …

fallen leaves
come flying from elsewhere:
autumn is ending

© Shiki

the stream hides itself
in the grasses
of departing autumn

© Shirao

the pampas grass
waves good-bye, good-bye,
to departing autumn

© Issa

Here is my attempt:

autumn ambles in
red-gold leaves dance now, soon gone–
in winter’s rush

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