Black Forest

Written for:  Carpe Diem #1596 – Black Forest

“Today I love to challenge you to create a “fusion-ku” with the two given haiku Jane Reichhold. The modern kigo for today is “Black Forest” and here are the haiku to work with:”

black forest
night extinguishes
the snow

sun and snow
still in the pines
the black forest

© Jane Reichhold (Extracted from her “A Dictionary of Haiku”, a modern saijiki)

Here is my humble attempt to create a “fusion-ku” with these two haiku by Jane:

pines covered with snow
the sweet perfume melts in the sun
ah! listen … that dripping

© Chèvrefeuille  (our host)

Here is my attempt:

magic of black forest
snow is heard but not seen
pines black at night

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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3 Responses to Black Forest

  1. pvcann says:

    I really like your fusion ku.

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