Swirl of Freedom

Posted on September 1, 2019 by purplepeninportland

Written for:  Sunday Muse #71

muse photo

Photography by Svetlana Belyaeva click HERE for website.

From a raft
she acts on a dream–
dance in air
feel red swirl
of her skirt in the sea breeze.
Freeze moment of time.

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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14 Responses to Swirl of Freedom

  1. Carrie V. H. says:
    September 1, 2019 at 1:50 am

    Sometimes we must act on a dream! Inspiring and beautiful poem Sara! ☺🌷

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  2. Cressida says:
    September 1, 2019 at 3:44 am

    Dream like with a reckless twist. Liked your take on the prompt.

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  3. Magaly Guerrero says:
    September 1, 2019 at 4:23 am

    Descriptive and dreamy, both literally.

    Also, I didn’t think of the wooden structure as a raft until your poem pointed it out. I thought it was a peer. Perception is a weird mistress.

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  4. Lori says:
    September 1, 2019 at 12:35 pm

    To make dream a reality she leaps.

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  5. wyndolynne says:
    September 1, 2019 at 12:36 pm

    Love the “acts on a dream”–the poem makes the image magic.

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  6. kanzensakura says:
    September 1, 2019 at 6:36 pm

    Leaping from a raft – quite a dream! and frozen in time. Beautiful.

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  7. Susie Clevenger says:
    September 2, 2019 at 4:07 pm

    Act on a dream..Yes!

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