Opposition

Written for Sunday Muse #118

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Through the looking glass
every drop of water falls
in opposition

 

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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19 Responses to Opposition

  1. Carrie V. H. says:

    Brilliant and true. Always glad to see you at the Muse Sara!

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  2. Helen Dehner says:

    … and of course you are right. Fascinating take on an image that (I believe) is quite the challenge.

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  3. wyndolynne says:

    I’m now imagining an army charging down from the clouds. 🙂

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  4. A powerful message in few words. Well done!

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  5. gillena cox says:

    Luv where the prompt took you
    Happy Sunday

    Much💖love

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  6. qbit says:

    Ah, yes!

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  7. AJ says:

    Brief, Brilliant and weighty… Everything to like about this! Thanks for sharing

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  8. Jim says:

    Nice Senryū, Sara

    Opposition force
    Reflection is inside out
    Broke the water glass

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