Written for: dVerse Poets Pub – Quadrille #108 – Among the Brambles
(posted by Linda Lee Lyberg). ‘Use the word ‘bramble’ in a 44-word quadrille.’
Squatting, sliding
from one group of weeds
to next, spraying
white vinegar, twisting,
and pulling. Most
eventually yield, except
one. Sad to say I do
not see these leaves
are covered in brambles.
Race into the house,
scratches like hatches.
Next time, longer gloves.
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Thanks, Lucy!
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Yeah I’ve got one like that in my garden – I’ve tried snippers, mower, and hoicking on it – and it’s still there, thorns always find me out. (I may have to move. 🙂)
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If it’s not paying you rent, kick it out!
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So curious about why you were spraying white vinegar. Yet another use for it?
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Absolutely. It makes the weeds wilt, so they are easier to cut.
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Ha.. new trick every day. Thaks.
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There is something about those tiny thorns that sometimes hurt more than big ones.
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Trust me, they do.
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Beware those leaves of three!! Long sleeves and long pants highly recommended!
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Now you tell me!
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Beautifully rendered, Sara! 💝💝
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Thanks, Sanaa!
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I like scratches like hatches. Makes me think of hatching in drawing, criss-crossing to get a 3D effect.
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I was thinking about that.
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OUCH!!!
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Indeed!
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😂
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Made me smile. I enjoyed reading this.
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Thanks, Bill!
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Of course.
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