Picnic Gone Awry

Posted on October 27, 2020 by 
Written for:  Sunday Muse 131


What kind of ambience
is this for a picnic? I
cannot tell whether
it is day or night.  
Should have brought
my watches.

What good are your
watches?  They slip
and slide.  No one
is able to read them.

Stop quarreling.  If
I wanted a headache
I could have stayed
home with Diego.

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							I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy.  We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. 
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								qbit says:			
    
			
			
    
				October 27, 2020 at 1:21 pm			
    

			
    “Should have brought
    
my watches” – LOLOL!
    

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								Helen Dehner says:			
    
			
			
    
				October 27, 2020 at 2:28 pm			
    

			
    Love the back and forth banter taking place here …..
    

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								Beverly Crawford says:			
    
			
			
    
				October 27, 2020 at 3:20 pm			
    

			
    You tell ’em, Frida!   Still, maybe they’re more entertaining than Diego!
    

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								Susie Clevenger says:			
    
			
			
    
				October 27, 2020 at 6:29 pm			
    

			
    This made me giggle. Love it!
    

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								Jim says:			
    
			
			
    
				October 27, 2020 at 11:57 pm			
    

			
    A stary night under the painted moon on I-95.
    
My watch would tell.
    
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								Carrie V. H. says:			
    
			
			
    
				October 28, 2020 at 11:55 pm			
    

			
    Love it Sara! Maybe Friday should have stayed home with Diego! LOL
    

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