Written for: The Sunday Muse #141
Ah! The transformation
begins. Steel woman
molts as iron armor
takes root in head
and neck. Soon time
travel will commence.
Each prong represents
an era. No one will
jeer at her now. Ah!
She feels the strengthening
surge within.
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I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York.
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I love where you took this warrior woman!
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Thanks, Helen!
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Yes the strength in this image has been captured beautifully in your words Sara! I love it! Wishing you a lovely new year and thank you for weekly being a part of the Muse!! 🌹
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Thanks, Carrie! Always my pleasure to be a part of this wonderful site.
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AI AI OOOO! Strongpoem Sara enjoyed it!
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Thanks, Rob!
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This piques the interest–where will she go? To what purpose? Also…this would make an amazing video. 🙂
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Thanks, wyndolynne. She has not chosen to share that information with me.
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This could be the beginning of a wonderful story.
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Thanks, Linda. I might need to read up on more science fiction to accomplish that.
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A riveting read. Let’s hope she puts all that strength to good use!
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Thanks, Bev!
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let’s time travel to a world of peace…
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If you find it first, let me know!
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HAPPY NEW YEAR, SARA!!!
I like the idea of “time transformation,” especially if it involves time travel. Right now that is not very productive, best done might be by sitting on a spinning gyroscope sitting exactly on one of the earth’s poles.. We flew over the International Date Line in the Pacific Ocean and I took a picture of it. And at Greenwich, London, U.K. we could put one foot in each day, they had a line there. Trouble is that it moves along with time, not faster nor slower.
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Not as magical as you would think. Thanks, Jim.
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It is good to feel that strengthening. Heaven knows, we need it.
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Thanks, Sherry. We do need extra strength right now.
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