Tattered, But Safe

Written for:  Sunday Muse  #170




I am torn and tattered
because I never truly
mattered to little
Susie.  Devil was in
that child.  Even her
parents were wary
of her.  She burned
me, drew symbols
on my face, and left
me here to rot when
the family moved.
I wonder who she is
torturing now.

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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31 Responses to Tattered, But Safe

  1. fireblossom32 says:

    Sounds like the Bad Seed!

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  2. gillena says:

    LUV THE END QUESTION, IT FOLLOWS THE SCHEME OF THINGS
    HAPPY SUNDAY
    MUCH❤LOVE

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  3. Jinksy says:

    Oo-er- what a creepy thought – needs the “look out! She’s behind you!!” warning?!

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  4. Helen Dehner says:

    Oh my, Devil Child on the loose! I didn’t see the abused doll you did, very insightful write, Ms. Sara.

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  5. Misky says:

    What a little horror!

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  6. Carrie V. H. says:

    A chilling scenario for sure Sara!

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  7. Beverly Crawford says:

    Well, a pox on Susie!! Great train of thought!

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  8. msjadeli says:

    Ooh the image pulled something raw out of you, Sara.

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  9. Susie Clevenger says:

    Ummm that is one dark Susie. I travel more in gray. 🙂 Love the poem!

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  10. robtkistner says:

    Ooh, dark, stinging, no-holds-barred punch of truth. Gripping Sara, but I really like it!

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  11. Jim says:

    Probably her parents bear the brunt of her meanness until they buy her the new
    doll she wants. It should be a punching bag with as painted face on the front.
    ..

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  12. wyndolynne says:

    *tiptoes silently backward* That was…intense. *glances over shoulder to check for creeping Susies*

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  13. wolfsrosebud says:

    Like Toy Story, you have made your point

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  14. Lisa says:

    Creepy. Oh, Little Susie needed to get professional help!

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