I am torn and tattered
because I never truly
mattered to little
Susie. Devil was in
that child. Even her
parents were wary
of her. She burned
me, drew symbols
on my face, and left
me here to rot when
the family moved.
I wonder who she is
torturing now.
http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/
I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York.
My goal is to create and share poetry with others
who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve
in you, and feel your sparks as well.
Probably her parents bear the brunt of her meanness until they buy her the new
doll she wants. It should be a punching bag with as painted face on the front.
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Gah!!!
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Yuch!
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Sounds like the Bad Seed!
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Right on target, Shay! I was actually thinking about that movie.
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LUV THE END QUESTION, IT FOLLOWS THE SCHEME OF THINGS
HAPPY SUNDAY
MUCH❤LOVE
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Thanks, Gillena!💜💜
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Oo-er- what a creepy thought – needs the “look out! She’s behind you!!” warning?!
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Oops, too late! Thanks, Jinksy!
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Oh my, Devil Child on the loose! I didn’t see the abused doll you did, very insightful write, Ms. Sara.
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Thanks, Helen!
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What a little horror!
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Imagine when she grows up!
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A chilling scenario for sure Sara!
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Thanks, Carrie!
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Well, a pox on Susie!! Great train of thought!
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Thanks, Bev!
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Ooh the image pulled something raw out of you, Sara.
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It did! Thanks, Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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Ummm that is one dark Susie. I travel more in gray. 🙂 Love the poem!
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Thanks, Susie! Gray is softer and nicer, like you.
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Ooh, dark, stinging, no-holds-barred punch of truth. Gripping Sara, but I really like it!
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Thanks, Rob!
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Probably her parents bear the brunt of her meanness until they buy her the new
doll she wants. It should be a punching bag with as painted face on the front.
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I like your idea for the new doll! Thanks, Jim.
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*tiptoes silently backward* That was…intense. *glances over shoulder to check for creeping Susies*
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Thanks, wyndolynne!
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Like Toy Story, you have made your point
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Thanks, Patti!
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Creepy. Oh, Little Susie needed to get professional help!
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and yet there were no doll therapists around.
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