Written for: Sunday Muse #178
"Pick one image to write about."
I had
high hopes for us–
happy marriage and children.
Hollywood will adore you, dear,
my loss.
Should you
tire of stardom
you will find stars await
silvering my eyes with love dear,
your gain.
http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/
I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are now back in New York.
My goal is to create and share poetry with others
who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve
in you, and feel your sparks as well.
I saw an ad last night for some new show called Ordinary Joe where, apparently, they guy can see how his life could have played out differently. Here’s a perfect script!
I look at this as a mirror poem, as when I matched up the lines in each poem, they meshed so well. Nice job, Sara. I’m sure he would be happy to know she waits for him.
Does a prodigal return …?
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Only sometimes, or in dreams.
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High hopes and stardom can be hard to read just like the stars. Love your take on the image and theme Sara!
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Thanks, Carrie!
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Beautiful!
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Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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I saw an ad last night for some new show called Ordinary Joe where, apparently, they guy can see how his life could have played out differently. Here’s a perfect script!
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Haven’t seen that yet, but my services could be made available. Thanks, Shay.
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Love the way this brought up images of spangly stage stars and the sweep of stars above.
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Thanks, wyndolynne!
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Sounds romantic and beautiful, but be drned if love would silver my eyes for Hollywood’s leftover!
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Ah, there is that.
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Nice. Your lines are perfect and they go perfectly with the photo.
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Thanks, Myrna!
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I look at this as a mirror poem, as when I matched up the lines in each poem, they meshed so well. Nice job, Sara. I’m sure he would be happy to know she waits for him.
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2nd “poem” = stanza
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Thanks, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Love in Hollywood … does it ever last … will she have moved on? I really enjoyed your poem, Sara!!!!
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Thanks, Helen!
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Not everyone can win. Nice vignette, Sara. We will hope those stars awaiting will remain patient.
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Thanks, Jim. We all need more patience.
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