Written for: Sunday Muse - Word Garden Word List #19 (posted by Fireblossom) Church breakfast is dreary, shivering in icy basement, forcing down congealed eggs on a gray, rainy day. Our humming host moonlights for AA meetings held here in evening. Joe has a vacant look, like someone pulled a shade down over his eyes. Haven't seen his wife in a while. Dusty rings of shredding holiday garland sits forlornly in an open box. As soon as it is late enough, I make my escape. Rain pummels the roof, unusual in this month of May. As I fetch my car, I hazard a glance at the small graveyard. The residents are silent. Only sound is the cascading rain bending the moaning willows. https://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/
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“Only sound
is the cascading rain
bending the moaning
willows.”
Beautiful.
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Thanks, Shawna!
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Wow, very different for you! Such a bleak scene, and so well depicted.
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Thanks so much, Joy. I am in a very bleak period of my life, so my natural darkness came through.
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I agree with Shay, bleak, but writing it out gives a feeling of strength and survival, too. I have been in that sort of place, and it takes time to “make our escape.” Very well written, and thanks for your comment at my place. ~Joy
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Truth. I survive because of my writing.
Thank you, Joy.
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The chill gloominess is all-pervading – wonderfully conveyed.
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Thanks, Writing!
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Dang! That’s depressing, LOL!
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Oh,, then I have succeeded!
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The mood you have painted here is down, but you have done it beautifully Sara!
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Thanks so much, Carrie!
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Sara, this is such a fine piece of writing … shivering as I sit here reading it … again.
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Thanks so much, Helen!
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